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Not every man can prove their weight, their worth.
With dreams of wings I am forced to walk.
I wish to become the challenger of my own gravity,
To rise so much higher than fate will allow.

A wall of fate; nothing satisfies.
Just because I defy you, doesn't make me wrong.
The size of my deed will reflect my ego,
Project myself, I must become exactly what I want.

So gravity, I challenge you to keep me down,
I defy you to crush my wings!
In defiance I scream at my fate;
"I'll gain my wings and you'll keep your weight!"
A poem with the idea of wanting to become exactly what you want.
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mayorofunkytown Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013
Absolutely love this!
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Sikizu Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Really nice, completely true.
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von19 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Student Writer
This deserves to be a DD.
Its... so.... fricking... GOOD!
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unde2aker Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013
more upbeat than my style but i like it nonetheless
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realARTIZT Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
wow you made this great expressing exactly what you wanted :D the mental image created by this and the rising to the fight between gravity as an enemy and flying was great. very uplifting words man :) Thanks for sharing this with #SayItHere!
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Kerriaa1 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013
Oh wow I adore this ^.^
It is absolutely perfect.
The inner strength is portrayed so beautifully, defiance right to the very end.
Very nicely structured, it contains so much depths, it is a delight to the eyes.
I love the words you used, like dreams of wings, it is so poetic and renders it even more precious.
The last stenza is pure perfection.
Well done ^.^
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CocoDeathMetaller Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow very very nice man! :D
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salemkapsaski Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Professional Filmographer
Wonderful poem!
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Dragslo Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Applause!
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